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It's hard to pretend I don't care.
It's hard to smile through these tears,
But showing you my weakness,
Well, that's my biggest fear.

You shouldn't know my heart is broken.
You shouldn't know that I still cry.
You shouldn't know that I still wonder,
And I'm still asking myself why.

But still I think about you,
Every night while I'm in bed.
I just wish I would've told you
All the things I should have said.

I should have told you that I loved you.
You meant the world to me.
I always thought it was apparant,
But I guess you couldn't see.

I wish that you'd still hold me.
I want to be back in your arms.
Then nothing in this world
Could ever cause me harm.

I'm sorry for whatever...
But what did I do wrong?
I can't help but think about you
Everytime I hear our song.

I wonder where you are now
And who you're holding tight,
But whoever your new love is,
I hope she treats your right.
This was written for somebody in my very recent past. Obviously his name is John. I guess you could say he's not in my past because I just wrote this poem yesterday. Oh well. He's the only person in my life who has ever made me feel this way.

It sucks when things fall out with a person but you just can't find a way to be angry with him/her. :-\
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GirlUndefined Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student Writer
Wow, it's heartbreakingly beautiful! I know exactly how you feel :)
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graveyardcreations Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2010
awww beautifully written! I just watched dear john and I searched for some deviants and I found yours. thank you for this poem! perfect. I can feel you... your feelings for he guy..
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snax-mcgee Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
Haha, thank you. I wrote this waaaaaaay before the book was ever even written--7 years ago!
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heyindiekid Featured By Owner May 14, 2008
oh man, this is splendid writing :heart:
you are great at expressing feelings :hug:
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snax-mcgee Featured By Owner May 16, 2008
Oh, thanks!
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Skarlit Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2008
Awww this is beautiful!
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justben Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2004
Strange title. You know to get a dear john letter in war times was a letter to soldiers wives telling them that their husband was dead.
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snax-mcgee Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2004
Well, the guy's name is actually John...but it was also intended as that "goodbye, we're done" kinda thing...not a war-time "hey, your husband is dead!" But, I didn't know that! Thanks :-)
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chameleon-18 Featured By Owner May 20, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, you've done it again... You've written another really great poem! Go you... I know the history behind this one as well... and you know if I could I would kick his ass... lol... well that's all... You've written another awesome poem and yea.
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snax-mcgee Featured By Owner May 23, 2004
Nah, John doesn't deserve an ass kicking. There's more behind it than you know about.
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