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For you I breathe
Just one last time.
Can’t have your heart
But you want mine.

You play with me
Like I’m a doll.
Well, guess what, love,
You can’t have it all.

Can’t take my dignity.
You can’t have my pride.
Can’t take my soul
While I’m alive.

I’ll let you go.
Now watch you fall.
I told you
You can’t have it all.

5-5-04
©2004-2009 ~snax-mcgee
:iconsnax-mcgee:

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I wrote this last night too. It's about someone that I've known for years, and, well, the poem tells the story.

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:iconbwett1:
craziness, a reawakening type thing, hehe very nice

--
"I'm gonna sing the Doom song!
:iconchameleon-18:
NICE SNAX NICE lmao... You know you're awesome...
:iconchameleon-18:
me: NICE SNAX NICE lmao... You know you're awesome...

you: I'm not!

me: LIAR!!!!!

You're lying about being good... You're awesome at it. So don't think that you're not!
:iconsnax-mcgee:
Dude, I use the same structure and rhyme scheme all the freakin' time!

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click here, bitches!
:iconchameleon-18:
I should have answered this a long time ago... obviously... but dude... Just because you use the same scheme and structure doesn't make your poems any less fucking effective. I meant to ask this before too... who was this poem about anyway???

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So what does it mean when your mind starts to stray?
Kaleidoscoping images of love on the way.
Brother you'd better get down on your knees and pray.
1,000 more fools are being born every fucking day.

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