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Goodbye by ~snax-mcgee:iconsnax-mcgee:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Old Poetry Structure > Emotional


Goodbye to these four years-
To everything we knew...
Goodbye to all the gossip
And drama we've been through.

Goodbye to all the good times.
I'll hold them in my heart
And try to think about them
While we're thousands of miles apart.

Goodbye to empty friendships
And all the promises we made.
We'll still have the photos
As our memories start to fade.

Goodbye to high school spirit days,
Dancing barefoot in the gym,
And those nights we stayed up talking...
It was always about him.
©2004-2009 ~snax-mcgee
:iconsnax-mcgee:

Author's Comments

Well, I inteded this to be about one specific thing, but I while I was writing it, I realized that a person can interpret it in several ways, which is why I'm not going to tell you what it was about.

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~snax-mcgee Apr 12, 2004, 5:06:43 PM
Oh, by the way, this isn't done either.

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click here, bitches!
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~snow-munkiie63 Apr 12, 2004, 5:38:30 PM
preeeeeeeeeettty

--
plaid skirts that hide scars walk in single file

so why not, why not taste the pain

I know what you're thinking, it must be caterpillar mating season
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~bwett1 Apr 12, 2004, 7:57:53 PM
simply beautiful, you have a style all your own :D

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"I'm gonna sing the Doom song!
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~bwett1 Apr 12, 2004, 7:57:54 PM
simply beautiful, you have a style all your own :D

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"I'm gonna sing the Doom song!
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!ThePhantomLizard Apr 13, 2004, 3:46:39 AM
Really awesome! So sad...but sweet! Great!

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~Beauty is truth, truth beauty~
John Keats

“Here lies one whose name was writ in water.”


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~Damain Apr 13, 2004, 7:34:30 AM
I really like it, it's moving...

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The face is the mirror of the mind, and eyes without speaking confess the secrets of the heart
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