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Late at night
Pretending to sleep
She lays very still
And quietly weeps.

It's three in the morning,
With tears in her eyes,
She can't help but think
Her whole life is a lie.

Day after day
She goes off to school.
There isn't one person
That she can't fool.

Everyone thinks
She's so full of pride,
But nobody knows
What's hiding inside.

She hides her emotions
Behind a big smile.
She' can't show her pain
'Cause that's not her style.

As each day passes
Her pain only grows,
But she holds it in
So nobody knows.

She can't let it out--
That's just too hard.
Only she knows
How badly she's scarred.

As the sun rises
She gets out of bed
With all of these thoughts
Filling her head.

She gets in the shower
To veil her tears
She turns on the water
So no one can hear.

She puts on her makeup.
She puts on her clothes.
She puts on her smile
So nobody knows...
©2004-2009 ~snax-mcgee
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Author's Comments

This was written back in my days of depression. It has the same rhyme scheme as "Broken Angel," but then again, most of my poems do. It's very hard for me not to follow that pattern.

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:iconkillerguppy:
woah thats pretty cool :thumbsup:
a lot of people are saying to try not to rhyme, but i still really like poems that do it well, and this is one of those :D
killer ending as well
:iconsnax-mcgee:
Oh, thanks! Yeah, it seems as though the new "in thing" is not to rhyme. Apparantly rhymes = happy sunshiney.

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:iconkillerguppy:
woo! sunshine...we in england haven't seen the sun for a looooooooong time :D
i still rhyme quite a bit because i tend to write songs rather than poems.
anyhoo keep up the good work
:icondamain:
i like the rhyming thing, and the whole uniform meter is great too, some poems are hard to follow but yours flows really well.
:iconsnax-mcgee:
Thanks. I'll try. :-)

England, eh? Wish I had an accent :-\

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:iconsnax-mcgee:
Thank you! I really appreciate that.

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:iconkillerguppy:
lol i don't have an accent! you have an accent :D
:iconsnax-mcgee:
well, that "woot" emoticon sure didn't work...

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:icondamain:
Its true though. I read your poems and im lovin' 'em!

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